Jon Bellion Essay Follow-up

[its_nat07]

this looks great!! the only thing i’d point out is that the lyrics you were quoting for The Internet are actually, “No real estate in the real world, How can you stop something not even there?” but means abt the same as u had
other than that, very detailed outline and i’m excited to see how you execute each element in ur paper :))

[Raul]

I thought your description of the songs for the paper were pretty good. Personally I think if you included his line of "When my mother was a mother to her mom". That one line in itself is a very heavy one, when I first heard it I remember pausing and being like woah

[FrankieFeelsIt]

This is the first time I've seen a reddit user cited in proper format. Jokes aside, I'm excited to read the completed essay eventually!
(ps. as @its_nat07 mentioned, you have some lyric mistakes)

[tiachante_]

@cosmcbrownie I think it’s a great outline but I would say to make it more distinctly obvious which aspect of health you’re looking these points back to (or both)

[cosmcbrownie]

@its_nat07 thank you diva

[cosmcbrownie]

@FrankieFeelsIt we cite ALL of our sources MLA style in this house

[FrankieFeelsIt]

@cosmcbrownie love it!

[its_nat07]

@cosmcbrownie lmaoo happy to help 🫶

[Zeonder]

man this is sick, love to see it when its finished, what type of books you drawing it back to? throw a random line your way that seems to fit the vibe off false alarms "And hype is something someone needs when fans can't give you loyalty" always hit me so hard

[cosmcbrownie]

@Zeonder The three we will tie back to are, "The Spirit Catches You and You Fall Down" "Crazy Like Us" and "Lissa"